Comments on: Part 2: Hair of the Body http://paulgerhards.com/blog_thisisthatis/2008/12/31/part-2-hair-of-the-body/ A householder's thoughts along the Middle Way Thu, 12 Jan 2012 02:37:15 +0000 hourly 1 By: Paul http://paulgerhards.com/blog_thisisthatis/2008/12/31/part-2-hair-of-the-body/comment-page-1/#comment-353 Paul Fri, 02 Jan 2009 21:11:28 +0000 http://paulgerhards.com/blog_thisisthatis/?p=657#comment-353 Hi Joy. Thanks for the suggestions. I'll give them some thought. Asked for or not, I know I can count on you for good advice given with the best of intentions. Meanwhile, stay tuned for Part 3: Nails. PaulG Hi Joy. Thanks for the suggestions. I’ll give them some thought. Asked for or not, I know I can count on you for good advice given with the best of intentions.

Meanwhile, stay tuned for Part 3: Nails.

PaulG

]]> By: Joy http://paulgerhards.com/blog_thisisthatis/2008/12/31/part-2-hair-of-the-body/comment-page-1/#comment-352 Joy Fri, 02 Jan 2009 02:56:46 +0000 http://paulgerhards.com/blog_thisisthatis/?p=657#comment-352 Very interesting, Paul... A TM evaluation, since you didn't ask: Your subject matter is interesting and informative. Stuff I didn't know (and maybe didn't want to know). How about starting each of the 32 posts with a one sentence intro about what you're attempting? Then your reader doesn't have to scratch his or her hairs to figure out WTF? -- perhaps never getting to the end to find out what's going on. Also consider moving some of the personal stuff up closer to the beginning and weave it in with the anatomical lecture... I'll be back! And Happy New Year! Very interesting, Paul…
A TM evaluation, since you didn’t ask:

Your subject matter is interesting and informative. Stuff I didn’t know (and maybe didn’t want to know).

How about starting each of the 32 posts with a one sentence intro about what you’re attempting? Then your reader doesn’t have to scratch his or her hairs to figure out WTF? — perhaps never getting to the end to find out what’s going on.

Also consider moving some of the personal stuff up closer to the beginning and weave it in with the anatomical lecture…

I’ll be back! And Happy New Year!

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